December 4, 2020
The final chapter of The Retelling of an Old Tale.
A tender-heart
She does seek.
Words of cunning
Does she speak–
To poison the mind
Against the soul—enmity
Is her goal.
And so, the tale of
Andúil’s Sorrow
Ever must be told;
Take care tender-heart, lest ye forget, and
Upon you should
Her addiction take hold…
In all my ways
She did I desire,
So within my mind was kindled a fire–
That burned my very senses
In an all
Consuming blaze–
So that my defenses were destroyed
For the length of my days…
Oh Andúil’s sorrow!
Her addiction will never appease
Empty promises of pleasure
Only ever a tease
To keep the tender-hearted
Ever craving her dis-ease!
And so
One by one,
They return to Andúil
Begging on their scabby knees;
The tender-hearted, hooked and hollow eyed demand, “You must help us…” (and with a pitiful cry) “…please.”
And to the one who lost, yet overcame
No longer to be be sold,
Real compassion turns
Within
The
Self–
A new tale
Now be told:
Of the battle betwixt mind and soul–
And of the Lion-hearted;
Deep within the fragile self,
Compassion’s seat–
A true stronghold—never again to be parted.
The end.
–NZain
Thank you for journeying with me on this tale of hope and the human condition.
May these words inspire beauty, compassion and hope.
All Was Emptiness, Except For My Own Self.
WooHoo!! That was beautiful and meaningful and filled with imagery. You are an exceptional writer/artist! Thank you for sharing your talents. 👏🏻🤩🎺🙌🏻💗
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Oh Charlotte your response really makes me smile. Thank you for your enthusiasm and supportive encouragement.
Without YOU the reader I would have no one to share with. YOU inspire the writing and the sharing! And YOU bring the imagery to life on your mind’s stage. I think that’s super cool.
Always I am grateful and humbled by your feedback. Glad to be journeying together. 🙏🏻😊💓
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A stunned silence…
Then one’s clap breaks the silence and the spell is broken…AND ALL APPLAUD…and cheer and give greatly heart warmed congratulations to the victor for the victory that is SHARED…and honored and loved and cherished and valued for how hard the trial IS and that may be finally won a thousand times over a day or thousands of days and day by day until it is, after all, a life time of victory over…
Dis-ease and how many many many a dis-couraged soul find their way to (be-en) courage[ed]…
or dis-cover what a hard life, under meanness, can cover up…would cover (every beauty of every soul) if not for the trials that victory sets for the victor.
Bravo! BRAVO!
I want to be clapping…and I am, but I was not the first. There are those braver than I. They wake us up…and we get carried along with the joy of the occasion…a beautiful occasion to celebrate the Lion Hearted!
Bravo! BRAVO!
Roar! ROAR! Compassion would speak from the HEART (the very seat of it).
Peace!
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M’dear shy Lion…
This scene you’ve created for me as the curtain closes…the relationship between seer and seen…exactly where you are in that joyful moment…I bow because I am humbled by your generosity of kindness.
With love and gratitude, thank you for allowing me the opportunity to play out this tale for you. And thank you for helping me to understand and see—the beauty of theatre. May we be blessed together.
PS. Already the wheels are spinning and whirling for the next story in which you, yes you M’dear have given me the impetus and the inspiration…so I do hope you continue—to continue being exactly as you are. 😊
ROAR….
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Beautifully written and wonderfully told Nina!😀🖐😻
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Thank you for the kind words, Steve. Thank you for being here! 😊🙏🏻💓🖐😺
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It’s my pleasure Nina! I always enjoy stopping in.😀🖐😺
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Good! That gives me reason to keep posting…🙈🖐😺
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And I will be there to read!😀🖐😺
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So very beautiful, ma! 💕
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Thank you, ma❤️
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